IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 149 - There is nothing that young people can teach older people

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

There is nothing that young people can teach older people.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

You should write at least 250 words.


Sample Answer 1:
Older people are generally believed to have better experiences and practical views about life than the young generation. Albeit that, I disagree with the view that young people have nothing to teach them.

First of all, young people can adopt technology faster and they can teach their seniors how to use these technologies to improve lifestyle. For instance, I have noticed several times that my 10 years old nephew was teaching my grandfather how to use Facebook, how to operate a digital camera, where to search for a particular information on the internet and lots of such things. So obviously my grandfather learned from my nephew and there are such many technological aspects young people can teach the older ones.

Secondly, youths know the changes and trends of the current world better than older persons and that’s something they can share with the aged people. For instance, my sister who is a sophomore shares numerous information with my father and aunt regarding the politics, social progress, roles of Government, policy changes etc. and to me, my sister seems to be well informed than my father and aunt regarding the current affairs.

From my experience, I can see that older people have a better experience and they can advice what are the correct things to do. In certain sectors, like research, teaching, banking etc. they are performing far better than young employees. But the sectors where the innovation and hardworking are required, young people prone to do better.

In my opinion, there are yet tonnes of things that the older people can learn from young people including technologies where the young people always excel than the elder generation.

 

Model Answer 2:
When it comes to learning, it can be learned from anyone- regardless of age, profession or race. Consequently, I totally disagree with the statement that young people can teach older people nothing. For several reasons, I think that young people can teach older people many things.

First of all, young people intend to learn new things faster including the use of new technologies. Young people can always teach the older how to use technologies and those modern tools. Second, young people are more motivated. They aspire to succeed professionally which requires vast knowledge and experience these days. So, they try to acquire knowledge and experience from different sources like the Internet, books, newspaper, magazines and of course from conversations with other people. In terms of knowledge sharing, the young generation can always motivate and teach the older generation. In addition to this, youngsters bring many fresh ideas to the team they are working in. For example, when my friend was hired as a software developer, he surprised everybody with his energy, a bunch of new and fresh ideas about what could be done to improve the process. The fresh idea and innovation of young people are something older people can always learn from. He was the youngest member of the team but everybody listened to him and it was like a fresh air, an impulse, which made everyone work harder. Even the senior employees of this office learned from this young person.

Finally, young people often know more about new technologies and how to use these. For example, my husband is 26 years old and he is a software developer So, he is often asked to deliver lectures for different companies and audience. Needless to say, the majority of people who attend those lectures are older than my husband and definitely, they can learn many things from the comparatively young person like my husband.

To conclude, I think that young people have many things to teach older people. Moreover, people from every generation have something to learn from each other. People learn through their entire lives from the history, life experience, elders as well as from younger people.

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0 # Joanna 2018-05-12 11:18
'Of cause' or 'of course' in the second essay?
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0 # Calicadow 2017-04-09 12:05
There's nothing that young people can teach older people.
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0 # Juri 2016-05-29 01:59
Thank you so much! This is really helpful! :D
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0 # Soumia 2016-03-23 14:52
It's helpful. It gives me ideas. Thank you.
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0 # IELTS Mentor 2016-03-24 00:48
We are happy to have you as a visitor of our website, Soumia.
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0 # Adriz 2014-11-23 02:24
Hello, I like this website a lot. Thanks. But I need to say that this essay does not answer the question at all. It all was about which nice things can young people do, but never refers to the question.
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+1 # IELTS Mentor 2014-11-23 14:12
Dear Adriz, we agree that this essay was added without a rigid moderation. However, we have reviewed and corrected the lacking this writing sample had. Thanks anyway for pointing this out.
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