IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 168 - Success in life comes from taking risks or chances

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning.

In your opinion, what does success come from?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
People have different views on how to achieve success as some believe that we should take risks for being successful, while others think measured planning is the key to success. The following essay will discuss both views in details.
 
On the one hand, it is a fact that taking risks is one of the most important keys to success. Risk takers are smart and innovative people as they have creative ideas and planning and they dare to take chances. Should the plan work out, people would start to recognise and  get attracted to their ideas and output, and soon it might become a big fortune for them. For example, in 2005 Steve Jobs created the Ipad tablet which was a newly developed product at that time. Although there was a risk of failure, he took the risk of launching the product to the world and in the end, the tablet became a sensational device all over the world.
 
On the other hand, some people think the only way to success is through careful and precise planning. They believe that in order to take new steps in life or to make a new business product, people should have a good feasibility study and proper planning. By having a good measurable planning, they would already anticipate and mitigate the risk should there be any failure in the plan.
 
In my opinion, I believe in the combination of both ideas as people must have plans and dreams in their life and the way to achieve that dream is through making action plans and take the risk.

[By - Darwin Lesmana]

 

Model Answer2:
Some people think that taking risks and chances will lead them to success. From my everyday experience and observation, I believe that success results from careful planning. I base my position on the following points.

First of all, I believe that careful planning helps a person to analyse his goal more deeply and make realistic goals. He knows exactly what he wants. Taking chances, from the other hand, does not give the opportunity to clearly understand a goal. A person just wants to do something to move forward and he takes risks when there is no need of it. A fixed plan helps a person to achieve it and make the person more determined and object oriented than those who don’t have a fixed aim.

Second, careful planning teaches people to arrange their time more carefully in order to reach their goals. They become more patient and calm. They plan every step. This allows people to find an easier way to reach their goals and  move forward faster. From the other hand, people who prefer to take risks without planning may spend more time without any improvements waiting for a chance to take. Take sportsmen for example. They exercise a lot before their performance to be in shape, do all their best and improve their previous results.

Finally, careful planning teaches them not to give up, try to find other ways to reach their goals in the case of failure. To sum up, personally, I think that all people who succeeded in life would agree with me that their success came with the hard work and careful planning.

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0 # Muhammed Nuhman 2017-09-11 04:36
Being successful in life depends on so many factors like hard work, planning etc.. Though no one would like to admit, luck too plays a key role sometimes in the success or failure of an individual. That's precisely why we should take calculated risks. If you end messing up chances by taking risks - that's far better than just sitting out, planning stuff and still doing nothing. However, we should never do something blindly. A little bit of knowledge about what we're trying to do and the expected outcomes would not hurt you. In fact, that's the way to success.
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+4 # Ellie 2017-06-06 08:50
Essay Topic - Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning.

In your opinion, what does success come from?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Answer:
The considered purpose of this context is to illustrate whether or not taking risks in a person’s life leads him to success and how much planning and careful steps help someone to reach his goal. Some people merely make a careful plan for their future while others are quite serious about it. Though both sides include specific benefits, as far as I believe, taking different risks and chances, plays a more important role in an exciting and more successful life, on account of several reasons.

To begin with, as the experiments and some latest investigations reveal, by making timely decisions people are following a common routine it gives them an opportunity to be punctual and act accordingly. So this will increase the chance of success in your job and career. But It should also be considered that every decision is followed by some unavoidable consequences. Therefore, taking unknown and unpredictable decisions and huge risks, might be a double-edged sword by leaving some probable pleasant and wicked impacts on someone’s life.

Secondly, life is full of unbelievable astonishing events and it’s a scene of upcoming excitements. In fact, it is our own decision whether or not to put them to good use and be drawn to the ocean of amazing surprises. As it has been mentioned above and as far as I feel, taking risks is an important factor of such a wonderful life. But if someone dedicates his time to make a safe, careful plan, he might not be able to understand the beauties of life.

In conclusion, among all the upcoming problems and shocking events and by considering the situation, we are the one who can opt for making a safe plan or take a risk and let it go in the hands of the destiny.
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+8 # Harmanjot 2014-12-10 07:46
This topic is very important and everyone reads and learns lots of new points from here.
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