IELTS graph 289 - Thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Line Graph:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Thefts per thousand vehicles; four countries, 1990-1999

Sample Answer:
The line graph presents data on vehicle theft cases in Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada from 1990 to 1999. As is obvious, car thefts in Great Britain were higher than that of other countries while this rate noticeably increased in Sweden.

According to the diagram, roughly 17 transportations in every thousand were stolen in the Great Britain in 1990 while this rate was between 6 to 8 per thousand in France, Canada and Sweden. Automobile embezzlement in Great Britain steadily climbed till 1993 at which point 2% cars were reported abducted. With some minor fluctuations, car lifting rates in France and Canada remained almost constant throughout the years. In contrast, carrier stealing rate in Sweden kept on soaring and in 1995 this proportion reached as high as 10 in every thousand vehicles. Motor vehicle theft in Great Britain sharply declined in 1994 but grew again till 1997 to strike 2% again. Afterwards, car theft incidents in Great Britain firmly declined between 1997 and 1999 when it actually increased in Sweden. Finally, in 1999, almost 1.5% automobiles in Great Britain and Sweden were reported stolen while it was almost one-third of that in France and Canada.

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0 # Thapa 2018-02-19 13:06
The graph illustrates the car-theft ratios in four countries (Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada) between 1990 and 1999. Overall, Great Britain suffered the highest car theft incidents whereas car stealing in Sweden steadily rose. However, Canada and France experienced almost the same ratio of car thefts during the period with a few minor fluctuations.

According to the graph, car stealing in Great Britain remained unstable throughout the period but the rate was higher than three other countries. It climbed to its peak in 1993 and 1997 when 2% cars were reported stolen. In 1999, car stealing cases in Great Britain stood at 16 out of a thousand.

Car theft in Sweden grew slowly but almost ceaselessly and in 1999, 14 in 1000 cars were reported stolen. This rate was less than 1% six years earlier.

However, theft of cars in France and Canada followed a similar pattern throughout the time period. French and Canadians had a similar number of cars stolen in 1999 (around 8 cars per thousand). However, the figure of the car theft in France was slightly higher in 1990, around 9 cars compared to that of Canada.
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