IELTS Essay 1195 - Shopping malls are great places to spend leisure time

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary.

To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.


Sample Answer 1:
Shopping malls, these days, are considered major recreational spots by many but people mostly visited them for necessity in the past. This new trend has many negative impacts on youngsters and the society as a whole. This essay will argue why it is completely unnecessary for people to spend their free time in the marketplace and purchase things that they do not need at all.

To begin with, modern shopping complexes offer many amenities besides products and shoppers tend to enjoy roaming around different markets and purchase whatever they like.
For instance, after the end of a semester, students prefer to meet up in a shopping mall, watch a movie and later have snacks in the food court. They say this reduces the stress of the exams and make them relaxed. Besides, with the reduction of open places and parks, many families gather at a large shopping mall to enjoy their holidays. However, this is a negative trend and has health hazards.  
 
As a consequence, the young generation tends to forget the beauty of nature and the stress relief provided by the outdoor world. This, in fact, drains out the energy of the youth and makes them lethargic. For example, a walk in a park or a day in a beach refreshes the soul more evidently than a day in a mall. Due to the excessive affection towards shopping, many people become shopaholics and get into debt.

To conclude, this essay argued why it is completely inappropriate for citizens to spend their free time in shopping malls. In my opinion, people should not rely on shopping malls to spend their free time and must enjoy their free time in a much energetic and enthusiastic way and thereby creating a better society.

[Written by Kanika]

Essay Topic:
For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary.

To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?

Essay Sample 2:
Introduction of shopping plazas to every nook and corner of the country, especially in cities, has inspired many to enjoy their spare time with friends, do shopping and have meals there. Shopping for people's basic need seems like an old trend. This changing drift is likely to accentuate in the coming decades. I believe this trend has an adverse effect on the young generation and frequent shoppers.

Modern shopping centres play a quintessential part by offering various products under a single roof ranging from smallest to largest and smartest equipment and gadgets, costumes, ornaments, all types of fruits, vegetables, beauty products, kitchen appliances and so on. Besides, these shopping complexes have movie theatres, coffee shops, kid's corner and food court to attract more people to spend their free time. However, people knowingly and unknowingly are becoming shopaholic, consuming junk food and spending unproductive time. This has a detrimental effect on people, particularly on the young minds. They often skip their classes to meet friends at a shopping mall, have aerated drinks, eat junk foods and avoid outdoor activities.

Furthermore, people's urge to purchase things they do not need creates a monetary asymmetry and put them in debts. When parents should take their children to a park or to a museum, they are actually taking them to a shopping mall and feeding them fast food. This will foster a disaster in terms of our future generation's health and education.    

To conclude, I believe that killing a great deal of time in shopping centres will become a stagnated issue in the future. I strongly feel that shopping malls should be used as a place for purchasing essential commodities rather than a place for leisure activity or a recreational area.

[Written by - Sita]

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0 # Darwin Sugiharto 2018-03-05 06:49
For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary.

To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?

Many people, these days, consider malls and plazas as great places for relaxing and gathering. However, in the past, people used to go to shopping centres when they absolutely needed to purchase something. To a certain extent, I would agree that a shopping complex is good for leisure activities but the trend brings more negatives consequences to our society.

It is a fact that people are spending more times in malls nowadays as those places are providing lots of entertainment and culinary experiences. Many malls are providing one-stop shopping experiences as they provide supermarkets, restaurants, entertainment zones, fitness centres, cinemas under a single roof. People go to those places not for shopping anymore, but they socialize, exercise and dine in. It is opposite to what people did in the past and considered advantageous by many.

On the other hand, the lifestyle of hanging out in malls has more negative consequences. Firstly, the trend has made people become more consumptive than ever. With various discounts that are being offered, lots of people are consuming things that they do not really need. Secondly, as shopping malls provide comfortable indoor facilities such as air conditioner, people prefer to spend more time indoors rather than outdoors. It is a fact that people would also need to have outdoor activities.

In conclusion, it is true that the purpose of people going to the mall has changed nowadays. As people in the past would go those places when they need something, these days they would spend times in malls for refreshing and relaxing. I personally believe that the trend has more negative effects on people's lives as they become more consumptive and do less outdoor activities.
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