IELTS Essay 1197 - Distance-learning programmes cannot bring benefit as attending colleges does

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words. 


 

Sample Answer: [Agreement]
Distance learning, a modern phenomenon, has become widely popular, especially after the invention of the internet. In the pre-internet era, it was confined to posts and TV and could attract a nominal number of leaners. Despite a boom in home-based learning trend due to the technological advancements, it is not as much beneficial as attending a formal educational institute, as far as I am concerned.

To begin with, university education is not restricted to some textbook lessons as it also focuses on creating an enlightened generation through a favourable environment where students learn to interact with each other, discover the diversity of cultures, and learn to face real-life challenges. Some video scripts and printed documents cannot teach them how to use those in the practical world. For instance, someone who learns a skill online finds it difficult to implement it in the real world. Thus their poor performance in professional life is imminent.

Moreover, instructors have extensive experience in dealing with students from different backgrounds and modify their lessons according to the capacity of the students. This is completely missing in the distance learning method and thus the single-package-fits-all model is less productive. Taking an online course to learn to play the guitar could be a classic example. A recent study by the University of Sussex reveals that nine out of ten online guitar learners fail to master it due to the lack of motivation and this is where the formal education comes in - motivating students. Taking distance learning courses for learning a programming language, or how to cook a cuisine can be useful for many but this can never be the alternatives to education we receive from colleges and universities.

To conclude, we attend educational institutes to learn and become enlightened citizens, not to memorise lessons and pass exams. While distance learning can be a bonus to our already enlightened mind, it can never be the same as studying at a college or university.

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Akiho Toyama
Essay topic:
Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does.

Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, distance-learning schools are getting trendy and many students study at home. However, some people opine that this type of schooling is not much beneficial compared to attending classes at colleges or universities. Personally, I strongly agree with this opinion because the merits of higher education contain meeting people and learning from them, and in-person classes are prone to be more practical for students.

The primary reason why I believe that the classroom-based education system is superior to online courses is that meeting others, who could be from diverse cultural backgrounds, directly offer numerous benefits. During my time at university, I used to enjoy conversations with friends before and after classes and learned many things from our conversations. On the contrary, online classes deprive students of these opportunities as students usually turn off their connection with virtual classroom just after the end of the class. Real-life conversations with professors and other students would broaden their horizons, enhance their communication skills and strengthen their communities which could help them learn more efficiently in the long run.

Another point behind my viewpoint is that discussions in normal classes tend to be more lively and engaging. This is because it would be easier for teachers to grasp the level of talents and interests of students, thus teachers could facilitate effectively to intrigue students’ attention. Successful facilitation of classes would fairly contribute to increment in satisfaction of school life. Moreover, just sitting still in front of a computer screen often degrade students’ concentration in classes and make them distracted.

To recapitulate, although the distance-learning trend will be more dominating with technological advancements, I completely agree with the notion that the advantages of attending educational institutions outweigh the ones of online learning. Classroom-based teaching enhances communications among students and exalts overall productivity.

Fayeza
Lovely essay and beneficial. I really appreciate your kindness to take the time and write these 300 words essay. Thank you so much for your dedication.
Sina
I think there is a small wrong dictation in the above essay. It should mention 'Enlightened', not 'Enlighted'.