Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 89 - The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Line Graph:

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

» You should write at least 150 words.

Unemployment in the US and Japan - 1993 & 1999


Model Answer 1:
The given line graph compares the proportion of unemployed people in the US and Japan through the period from March 1993 to March 1999. It is obvious that the unemployment rates of these two countries changed oppositely.

The percentage of the US tended to decrease over the years. However, at the same time, unfortunately, Japan witnessed the rapid growth in the rates. Nevertheless, in 1999, both nations almost had the same percentage, which means the lowest figures of the US were equal to the highest ones of Japan.

In March 1993, the proportion of unemployment in the US was a bit off 7% whereas that of Japan was about 2.5%. It was marked in 1998 when Japan's rate reached the highest point of approximately 5.2%. The contradiction happened to the US: its rate went to the lowest of 4.8%.

Although the processes of figures changing of these countries were totally opposite, the last numbers, amazingly, turned out to be extremely close. In March 1999, the rates of unemployment in the USA and Japan stood still at about 5.1% and 4.9% respectively.

[ Written by - Ha Nguyen Nguyen ]

 

Sample Answer 2:
The given line graph compares the unemployment rates in the USA and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999. As an overall trend, the USA succeeded to decrease its unemployment rate over the time while the scenario was completely reverse in Japan despite its initial ignorable rate of unemployment.

As can be seen from the given illustration, the unemployment rate in the USA was just over 7% in March 1993 while it was less than 2.5% in Japan. However, this rate kept on decreasing in the USA while it went up in Japan. In two years, the percentage of jobless Americans fall to just below 5.5% while it increased in Japan and stood at 3.0% at the same time. The opposite trend of the line graph depicts that unemployment rate in the USA gradually declined while increased in the case of Japan. The rates of joblessness in these two countries intersected each other in between March 1998 and March 1999 when the unemployment rate in both countries was just about 4.5%. At the end of 1998, the percentage of unemployment among the Americans became less than that of Japan. The data presents that jobless people’s percentage in the USA was just above 4.0 in 1999 while this rate in Japan reached to over 4.5% which was more than double than the initial rate of their unemployment.

[Written by - David Smith]

 

Sample Answer 3:
The given graph compares the unemployment rates in Japan and the USA from 1993 to 1999. As is observed from the given graph, initially in 1993, USA has a higher unemployment rate than it was in Japan but in few years, the USA managed to control this rate and got in a better position than that of Japan.

According to the line graphs, the unemployment rate in the USA was over 7% in 1993 and over time this rate kept on decreasing. Finally, in 1999, the unemployment rate in the USA decreased to just over 4.5% which shows the improvement the USA had been able to achieve. On the contrary, in 1993, Japan had about 2% unemployment rate but that kept on increasing over the year and after 6 years it reached to over 4.5%. Japanese job market showed a completely opposite trend than the USA job market.

In summary, the USA managed to control the unemployment rate better than Japan did for the given period though initially, Japan had less unemployment problem than the USA.  

 

Sample Answer 4:
The given line graph compares the unemployment rate in two countries: US and Japan from 1993 to 1999. As is observed from given graph, initially unemployment rate in the US was much higher than it was in Japan. But after a specific gap of years, the US managed to resolve the problem of crucial unemployment. Interestingly, after few years unemployment rate in Japan magnified significantly.
    
As is presented in above line graph, it can be seen clearly, in 1993 unemployment rate in the US was exactly 7.0 percent and after six years period, it slumped to approximately 4.5 percent in 1999. On contrary, in 1993 Japan was full of prosperity and its unemployment rate was around 2.5 percent. Unfortunately, after six years situation changed completely and the unemployment rate in Japan surged over 4.5 percent respectively. Interestingly, Japan job market showed opposite trend than US job market.
   
Ultimately, US managed to overcome the problematic situation of unemployment in 1999. Apart from this unemployment in Japan kept on soaring year by year and reached at 4.5 percent in 1999. Finally, unemployment issue of Japan became severe compared to the USA.

[ Written by -  Faisal Ali ]
 

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0 # Simone 2017-12-11 19:30
The line graph illustrates the unemployment rates in the USA and Japan over the last six years of the twentieth century. Generally speaking, there was an inverse trend between the joblessness rates in the USA and Japan, while the unemployment rate in the US decreased steadily during the studied period, the rate in Japan rose constantly.

In March 1993, roughly 7 out of hundred Americans were unemployed while this rate was less than 2.5% in Japan. The rate of unemployment in the USA afterwards kept on decreasing steadily while it was completely opposite in Japan. After 3 years, more than 3% Japanese population was unemployed while it was still more than 5% in the US. However, this rate intersected during August 1998 when both countries witnessed around 4.5%, jobless people. The data trend clearly outlines that unemployment rate in the USA decreased over the time while it went higher in Japan.
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+1 # Hà Thúy 2017-01-09 03:40
The chart illustrates the unemployment rates in the US and Japan during 6 years, commencing from March 1993. Overall, the unemployment rate in the USA decreased over the period while japan’s joblessness increased.

As can be seen from the graph, in 1993, the jobless people in the US stood at 7% and then dropped moderately to 5.5% in March 1995. However, between March 95 and March 96, the rate remained almost the same. Next, this rate declined slightly and reach nearly 5.2% in between March 95 and March 96. Finally, it finished the period with a slight fall to 4.1% during March 99.

As for japan, the percentages of people unemployed began at a lower point, about 2.4%, then it climbed slowly to 3.5% in March 95. But it went up slowly to 3.2% in March 1996. However, the next year it remained almost unchanged before the unemployment rates increased gradually at 4.7% in March 99. At that time the unemployment rate in Japan crossed the unemployment rate in the USA.
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+3 # Arsyidik 2016-12-08 13:30
The given line chart illustrates the percentages of unemployment in the United State and Japan, over a 6 years period, between March 1993 and March 1999.

As can be seen from the figure that the percentage of jobless people in the US was higher than that of Japan from 1993 to 1998 and the number was equal in March 1999. The figure also shows that the rate of unemployment in the US reduced but Japan’s unemployed rate rose over until the last period.

In March 1999, the rate of unemployment in Japan was 2.5% and it went up to 4% in 1994. Fluctuations happened from 1994 to 1995 and Japan’s unemployment rate increased until March 1999 by 5.0%. However, unemployment in the US was 7% in 1993 but it reduced by 2 percent (nearly 5.0%) in 1996-97. It also remained steady between 1997 and 1998. On the other hands, both the US and Japan had around 5.0% unemployment in 1999.
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0 # Ceren 2016-03-16 05:21
The line graph compares changes of unemployment scenario in the USA and Japan from 1993 to 1999. Overall, the chart indicates that proportion of unemployment in the USA decreased at the end of the period and the proportion of unemployment increased in Japan.

It is observed that the unemployment rates of these two countries changed oppositely. Between 1993 and 1997, US unemployment rate showed a downward trend with rapid fluctuations, whereas the unemployment rate in Japan indicated an upward trend. In March 1993, the US had 7 percent unemployment in comparison with about 2.5 percent in Japan. There was a rapid decline in the USA's unemployment rate between 1993 and 1995, from 7 percent to just over 5.5 percent. From 1995 until the end of the period, the percentage of unemployment decreased slightly and it reached approximately 4 percent in the USA. The percentage of unemployment in Japan started at about 2.5 per cent and that rose steadily above 4 percent. At the end of the period, it peaked at over 4.5 percent.

Though initially unemployment rate was higher in the USA than that of Japan, the USA managed to decrease this while it was opposite for the unemployment scenario in Japan.
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+1 # Nazim 2016-01-05 09:23
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0 # Nima 2015-08-17 04:34
The graph compares two trends of unemployment rates in the US and Japan in March 1993 and March 1999.
As is presented as a census of a perusal the given illustration shows US and Japan had 7% and 2.3% unemployment respectively at first in 1993. The US unemployment decreased after 1993 and plunged until 1995 and met 5.3%. After that year unemployment rate increased 0.5% between 1995 and 1996. The subtractive flow continued in 1996 and declined unemployment rate and received 4.1% as the nadir in 1999. In another distinctive scenario, the idle rate grew until 1996. Its amount fluctuated very little and was almost stable until 1998 in 3.3 and 3.5 range. After 1998 its volume swelled up rapidly until 4.8% as summit of unemployment rate in Japan.
In summary, two countries had different behaviours and followed a various trend and also in March 1993 Japan had the minimum amount of unemployment rate and the US had the maximum but this scenario changed over time.
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0 # Rony 2015-03-10 15:54
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