IELTS graph 250 - Number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Line Graph:

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagrams below.

Write at least 150 words.

                              Tourist Visit in Malaysia and Dubai (in ‘000)

Tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003

Sample Answer 1:
The line graph compares the number of travellers who visited Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003. Overall, more tourists went to visit Malaysia from 1995 to 2000, but afterwards, Dubai got more visitors.

Getting back to the details, 100 thousand tourists visited Malaysia in 1995 and it was more than double than the number of tourists in Dubai at the same time. Next year, visitors to Malaysia increases while declined in Dubai. Afterwards, the number of tourists in Malaysia and Dubai rapidly increased and in 1998, 200 thousand people went to Malaysia compared to over 150 thousand in Dubai. Interestingly, holidaymakers’ number to both these places became identical and reached to over a quarter million in 2000. Next year, both countries witnessed a hike in their tourists’ number which stood at around 325 thousand. A reverse trend during the next few years followed with more tourists in Dubai than in Malaysia. In 2002 Dubai got more trippers and this trend continued in the next year when 0.4 million vacationers visited Dubai compared to less than 0.25 million in Malaysia.  

Sample Answer 2:
The line graph compares the number of visitors in Malaysia and Dubai between 1995 and 2003. Both these countries received more tourists in 2003 than they did in 1995 and Dubai’s share of travellers went higher than that of Malaysia despite a reverse scenario in early years.

According to the illustration, the number of tourists who visited Malaysia in 1995 was 0.1 million, more than double than that of Dubai. The visitors in Malaysia kept on increasing very swiftly till 2000 when it attracted more than a quarter tourists. On the contrary, Dubai, despite a decline in 1996, managed to attract more vacationers and had almost the same number of people visiting there in 2000 as it was in Malaysia. Next year, both of their tourists’ number went up but afterwards Dubai had been more successful in getting more visitors than Malaysia did. In 2003, four hundred thousand people travelled to Dubai, an overwhelming rise than that of 1995, while Malaysia managed to attract fewer than 250 thousand vacationers, which was roughly 2.5 times than that of 1995.

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Nguyen Thuong Vu
The provided line graph illustrates the growth of tourism in Malaysia and Dubai, throughout 8 years starting from 1995.

Generally speaking, tourism in both Malaysia and Dubai developed during the time, and visitors to Malaysia began to decline after 2001, while an increasing trend can be seen in Dubai.

Initially, in 1995, there were 100 thousand tourists in Malaysia, which was more than double than the number of visitors to Dubai. The figure rose continuously in the Southeast Asian country until 2001, reaching approximately 320 thousand. On the other hand, Dubai saw declines in three different periods of time: 1995-1996, 1998-1999 and 2001-2002. Its number of visitors reached 200 thousand in 1999, which was about a year after Malaysia's tourism hit this mark, then intersected the nation's figure in 2001.

Another look at the graph suggests that also in 1999, the difference between tourists in Malaysia and Dubai was about 100 thousand, which had been the largest margin before the year 2003. While tourism in Malaysia dropped steadily since 2001 to eventually become under a quarter of a million, that of Dubai surged to 400 thousand, the highest point throughout the period.