Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 52 - Changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Column Graph:

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.

 maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007

Sample Answer 1:
The graph shows the estimated highest population of elephants in nine different Asian countries. Overall, India had the highest number of elephants and except in Cambodia and Laos, the number of elephants declined noticeably.

According to the graph, elephants in most of the countries in the list fell in 2004 than that of earlier 1997. This was more prevalent in Malaysia and Thailand where the number of this species dropped to less than half the figure in 1997. In the former, the number of elephants fell as low as 1000.

India remained the country with by far the largest elephant population but experienced a dramatic decline in the number of elephants in seven years. China had the least number of elephants which was a thousand only and this decreased to half of that in seven years. Although the trend was downwards overall, the elephant population in Laos and Vietnam remained almost the same, just over a thousand. The only country where elephant's population actually grew was Cambodia, where the number increased by 200.

 

Sample Answer 2:
The bar graph provides information on the number of elephants in different countries between 1997 and 2004. Generally speaking, in India and Myanmar, the maximum number of elephants inhabited and the total number of elephants decreased over time.

As is presented in the bar graph, approximately 10 thousand elephants lived in India in 1997 which was the highest among the given countries. Myanmar is the second largest country for elephants’ dwelling. Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos and China had about 1000 elephants in 1997 while Malaysia, Sri Lanka and Thailand had roughly 3000 elephants. The least number of elephants were in China in 1997.

After 7 years, in 2004, the number of elephants in all countries decreased except in Laos. The number of elephant in India fell to 7500 in 2004 while this number decreased to 4800 in Myanmar and only to 1200 in Thailand. Cambodia is the only country where the total number of elephants increased while the number reached to an alarming number of less than 500 in China.

In summary, India, Myanmar and Thailand had the largest number of elephant among the given countries and except in Cambodia and Laos, elephants presence decreased only in 7 years which is alarming for the existence of this species.      

 
Model Answer 3:
The diagram outlines the population distribution of elephants in nine Asian countries in 1997 and 2004. Generally speaking, India had the highest number of elephants in both years while the total number of this species harshly declined during the period.

As is presented, roughly 10000 elephants inhabited in India, the highest, which dropped to nearly 7500 in just seven years. Myanmar had the second largest number of elephants, over 5000, while China had only 1000 elephants in 1997. Their number in both countries declined and only 500 elephants were recorded in China in 2004.

Malaysia and Sri Lanka had around 3000 elephants and in just 7 years, the number of elephant in the former country declined to as low as 1000. Vietnam and Laos had around a thousand elephants and the figure remained the same in Laos. The only place where elephant population grew was Cambodia where more than a thousand elephants dwelled. Finally, Thailand was the home to approximately 4 thousand elephants, which dropped to just over a thousand in merely 7 years.
 
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+4 # Iraj 2016-07-31 14:35
The bar graph illustrates the variation in the maximum number of elephants in Asian countries between 1994 and 2007.

It is immediately evident that the number of elephants in India, Malaysia, Thailand and China dropped considerably while the number of elephants in Myanmar, Laos, Sri Lanka and Vietnam remained almost steady. In contrast to above-mentioned countries, the number of elephants increased slightly only in Cambodia.

Firstly, the maximum number of elephants in India decreased significantly from almost 10000 in 1994 to nearly 7500 in 2004. In the same period, the number of elephants in Thailand and Malaysia dropped dramatically from approximately 3800 to around 1200 and from 3000 to slightly above 1000 respectively. The number of elephants in China halved to roughly 500 in the same period.

Secondly, the number of elephants remained almost at the same level in Laos and Vietnam at around 1000 between 1994 and 2004. However, in Sri Lanka, it dropped slightly from 3000 to 2800 over the period. Only in Cambodia, the number of elephants increased slightly from just about 1300 in 1994 to nearly 1500 in 2004.
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