IELTS Essay 1193 - Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.


Sample Answer 1:
More than one-tenth of the global population suffers from some sort of psychological issues and yet mental illness gets far less priority that it actually deserves. Worse, minor psychological issues are mostly ignored by the families while severe cases are heinously treated and tagged as madmen only to lock them away. There is no denying that psychical disturbance does not get the proper care and acceptance from the society all around the world.

To begin with, the number of general hospitals that treat patients with bodily disease and the specialist doctors and nurses devoted to them are overwhelmingly higher than the healthcare centre and staffs allocated for mental complexities. Someone just needs to walk few blocks to notice a hospital in any city. However, this is not the case for clinics that deal with patients’ mental issues. This is a cruel discrimination when World Health Organization clearly outlines the number of patients who need psychotherapists, mental support and treatment for their psychological intricacies. 

Moreover, the social view towards a physically sick child is different than to an autistic child. When the parents openly discuss the sickness of the former one, the latter one tries to hide their children from being mistreated. This raises a serious question of moral integrity and social norm towards people who need special care. Due to the astigmatism of our social and healthcare system, we have so many cases of suicide and criminals in the world. When each county increases its budget to research for deadly diseases, there is scarcely any budget allocation for preventing suicides. For instance, the USA allocate a lion share of its budget for the healthcare sector, but there is no separate allocation for preventing self-destruction, as it this is not an illness at all.

To conclude, the time has come for us to change the old dogma about psychological problems and understand that proper treatment for psychosocial patients is as much important as treating the physically ill people.

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